Comments:
Lauren: Hi! I like the front text although I don't think it is a good idea when you're writing a long piece.
Lauren: I like you background, and the pictures. I got the same picture which has us eating.
The International School of Penang (Uplands)
Jalan Sungai Satu
Batu Feringgi 11100
Penang,
MALAYSIA.
Underwater World Langkawi Zon Pantai Cenang, Mukim Kedawang, 07000 Langkawi, Kedah.
November 18, 2008
Dear Sir/Madam,
Trip to Langkawi
Thank you for the exciting things offered at the Underwater World exhibits. We really enjoyed the shows and the sea creatures. My favorite sea creatures were the otters. The otters swam really smoothly and fast. I saw a lot of different fish and I was amazed by how they all swam together. I enjoyed reading the information, I thought it was fascinating. I love seeing many varieties of different kinds of sea shells. I loved the texture and details on the shells. The show was wonderful when keeper fed different kinds of fish. The sting rays were incredible how they ate and swam around.
The things there were very exciting and attracting. We all loved everything there.
Thank you for everything. We hope to go there again.
your sincerely,
Brittany
Year 6 students
Comments:
1. Lauren: I like your letter. I hope you have another copy of that writing! :)
2. Ambika: I also like your letter. Really nice.
Comments:
Lauren: Hi! I like the front text although I don't think it is a good idea when you're writing a long piece.
Lauren: I like you background, and the pictures. I got the same picture which has us eating.
The International School of Penang (Uplands)
Jalan Sungai Satu
Batu Feringgi 11100
Penang,
MALAYSIA.
Underwater World Langkawi
Zon Pantai Cenang,
Mukim Kedawang,
07000 Langkawi, Kedah.
November 18, 2008
Dear Sir/Madam,
Trip to Langkawi
Thank you for the exciting things offered at the Underwater World exhibits.
We really enjoyed the shows and the sea creatures. My favorite sea creatures were the otters. The otters swam really smoothly and fast. I saw a lot of different fish and I was amazed by how they all swam together. I enjoyed reading the information, I thought it was fascinating. I love seeing many varieties of different kinds of sea shells. I loved the texture and details on the shells. The show was wonderful when keeper fed different kinds of fish. The sting rays were incredible how they ate and swam around.
The things there were very exciting and attracting. We all loved everything there.
Thank you for everything. We hope to go there again.
your sincerely,
Brittany
Year 6 students
Comments:
1. Lauren: I like your letter. I hope you have another copy of that writing! :)
2. Ambika: I also like your letter. Really nice.