Annie Chung My name is Annie, I come from Taiwan. I am 11 years old. My hobbies are sports and making stuff out of cloth. My favorite colors are black and white, my favorite animal is DOG. I liked ART, because I can learn how to draw better and sawing in ART, and it was fun. I liked P.E, but we train every day and i always get tired, I learned many kind of sports in P.E, Mr Lees makes me run faster and makes me have more energy. I like D.T, because I can learn how to work with woods, cutting, planning, coloring, making, and the safety rules in D.T. I liked SWIMMING, because I learned many strokes during the swimming lessons, and I can swim much faster now. I liked DRAMA because I like to act. I have many friends too, my friends are Lexi, Victoria, Wenju, Malaika, Brittany, Ashley, Su Jin, Tessa, Mikako, Evita, Cludia, Komal, Melia ，and Mai. I always play with my friends. I like all of my friends, because they are all nice to me. I improved greatly during the school days, and I've learned more English too.
Dear Annie,
I like what you have written in your reflection.
Please read carefully and check for complete sentences which will then need;
Full stops/ capital letters
If there are more than one of something it needs a plural verb eg, My hobby is sport and making stuff.
It should read;
My hobbies are sport and making stuff. ( I am sure you could choose a better word that Stuff)
People’s names always take a capital.
Can you change your font to Tahoma 12 then the whole book will have the same font.
Please find some pictures to finish the second page.
Comments
Lauren: Hi Annie! I love your piece! The borders, front text were really good! Just some corrections need to be done... ^^
Annie Chung
My name is Annie, I come from Taiwan. I am 11 years old. My hobbies are sports and making stuff out of cloth.
My favorite colors are black and white, my favorite animal is DOG. I liked ART, because I can learn how to draw better and sawing in ART, and it was fun. I liked P.E, but we train every day and i always get tired, I learned many kind of sports in P.E, Mr Lees makes me run faster and makes me have more energy. I like D.T, because I can learn how to work with woods, cutting, planning, coloring, making, and the safety rules in D.T. I liked SWIMMING, because I learned many strokes during the swimming lessons, and I can swim much faster now. I liked DRAMA because I like to act. I have many friends too, my friends are Lexi, Victoria, Wenju, Malaika, Brittany, Ashley, Su Jin, Tessa, Mikako, Evita, Cludia, Komal, Melia ，and Mai. I always play with my friends. I like all of my friends, because they are all nice to me. I improved greatly during the school days, and I've learned more English too.
Dear Annie,
I like what you have written in your reflection.
Please read carefully and check for complete sentences which will then need;
Full stops/ capital letters
If there are more than one of something it needs a plural verb eg, My hobby is sport and making stuff.
It should read;
My hobbies are sport and making stuff. ( I am sure you could choose a better word that Stuff)
People’s names always take a capital.
Can you change your font to Tahoma 12 then the whole book will have the same font.
Please find some pictures to finish the second page.